Whilst doing our pitch our teacher and peers were evaluating us and gave us feedback at the end, here is what they had to say:
Rebecca our teacher: "The choice of mise-en-scene is great and very well thought out and detailed, there is a clear story line and you explained it very well. You should make sure the title is followed by more action so it doesn't look like a trailer and don't forget an establishing shot"
One group said that they like our ident and they thought the plot seemed very interesting.
Another group suggested that we could have used more images in our pitch however they liked our style of presentation and the use or Prezi and Slides.
Rebecca our teacher: "The choice of mise-en-scene is great and very well thought out and detailed, there is a clear story line and you explained it very well. You should make sure the title is followed by more action so it doesn't look like a trailer and don't forget an establishing shot"
One group said that they like our ident and they thought the plot seemed very interesting.
Another group suggested that we could have used more images in our pitch however they liked our style of presentation and the use or Prezi and Slides.
Well done:
- Very detailed about ideas and what is going to happen.
- Original
- Well explained
- Detailed mise-en-scene
- Great ident
- Interesting
- Good style of presentation
- Good examples
What next:
- Record sounds
- Photo of room 333
- Establishing shot
- More lighting
- Target audience research
- Use more media and visuals eg. photos, videos
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